From d01ec0b07d425580cf3dcf7246ec807dbcf1aa5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tomas Hozza Date: Fri, 15 Nov 2013 10:44:45 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Improve texts in dialogs to be more clear Improve texts in Hotspot sing-on dialog and also some dialogs labels and pop-up panel button label, to describe the situation more clearly. Changes are proposed and reviewed by Red Hat Documentation Team. Signed-off-by: Tomas Hozza --- panel/pui.xml | 48 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------- 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/panel/pui.xml b/panel/pui.xml index 4915d83..f1051b2 100644 --- a/panel/pui.xml +++ b/panel/pui.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ False 5 - Hotspot Signon + Disable DNSSEC for Hotspot Sign On dialog @@ -16,10 +16,15 @@ True False - Some networks need insecure signon. After you log in to the -network via its portal page, select <i>Reprobe</i> to get secure again. + Some networks, such as Hotspots, require you to sign on, or register, +before allowing full network access. By clicking <i>OK</i>, DNSSEC will be +disabled to allow you to connect to the captive portal's sign-on +page. After you have signed on and full network access has been enabled, +DNSSEC-trigger should detect this and enable DNSSEC again. You can also +select <i>Reprobe</i> to attempt to establish a secure connection to a DNSSEC +capable name server. -<i>Please, stay safe out there.</i> +<i>A red exclamation mark in the icon warns you when DNSSEC is disabled.</i> True @@ -138,10 +143,10 @@ network via its portal page, select <i>Reprobe</i> to get secure aga True False - There is no web access on this network. Do you have to login for that? + There is no access to external websites from this network. Do you have to login for that? -While you login you are <i>insecure</i>, for backwards compatibility, until -dnssec-trigger can detect web access. +When you select <i>Log in</i>, DNSSEC will be disabled for backwards compatibility reasons, until +DNSSEC-trigger can detect web access. <i>Skip</i> this if you do not have to log in on this network. True @@ -162,7 +167,7 @@ dnssec-trigger can detect web access. False 5 - probe dnssec results + Results of DNSSEC probe 400 280 normal @@ -251,7 +256,7 @@ dnssec-trigger can detect web access. True False False - Hotspot signon + Hotspot sign-on True @@ -331,28 +336,29 @@ dnssec-trigger can detect web access. True False - <b>The Network Fails to Support DNSSEC</b> + <b>This Network Fails to Support DNSSEC</b> -The network you are connected to does not allow DNSSEC, via -the provided DNS caches, nor via contacting servers on the -internet directly (it filters traffic to this end). It is not possible -to provide DNSSEC security, but you can connect insecurely. +The network you are connected to does not allow DNS Security +Extensions (DNSSEC) via the provided DNS caches, nor via contacting +DNS name servers on the Internet directly (it filters traffic +to this end). It is not possible to provide DNSSEC, but you can +connect insecurely. Do you want to connect insecurely? -* if you choose <b>Disconnect</b> then DNS is disabled. It is safe, -but there is very little that works. +* if you choose <b>Disconnect</b> then DNS is disabled. +It is safe, but there is very little that works. -* if you choose <b>Insecure</b> then the DNSSEC security is lost. +* if you choose <b>Insecure</b> then DNSSEC is disabled and security is lost. You can connect and work. But there is no safety. The network interferes with DNSSEC, it may also interfere with other things. Have caution and work with sensitive personal and financial things some other time. -Some hotspots may work after you have gained access via -its signon page. Then use <i>Reprobe</i> from the menu to retry. +Some Hotspots may work after you have gained access via +its sign-on page. Then use <i>Reprobe</i> from the menu to retry. -<i>Stay safe out there!</i> +<i>A red exclamation mark in the icon warns you when DNSSEC is disabled.</i> True @@ -383,7 +389,7 @@ its signon page. Then use <i>Reprobe</i> from the menu to retry. True False - There is a software update available for dnssec-trigger. + There is a software update available for DNSSEC-trigger. Do you wish to install the update? True -- 1.8.3.1