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From a7f8bd7d142ef6342e95be9a428df695a951034b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Mon, 17 Feb 2014 03:37:18 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] doc: resolve missing/extraneous words or inappropriate forms

Issues fixed:
* missing words required by grammar
* duplicated or extraneous words
* inappropriate forms (e.g. singular/plural), and declinations
* orthographic misspellings

(cherry picked from commit 66f756d437658cc464bfb5647c97efd0cf77f933)

Conflicts:
	man/pam_systemd.xml
	man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml
	man/sd_bus_error.xml
	man/sd_bus_open_user.xml
	man/systemctl.xml
	man/systemd-nspawn.xml
	man/systemd-system.conf.xml
	man/systemd.exec.xml
	man/udev.xml
---
 man/busctl.xml                   | 2 +-
 man/journalctl.xml               | 2 +-
 man/journald.conf.xml            | 6 +++---
 man/machine-info.xml             | 6 +++---
 man/sd_journal_print.xml         | 2 +-
 man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml      | 2 +-
 man/systemd-journald.service.xml | 4 ++--
 man/systemd-system.conf.xml      | 2 +-
 man/systemd-udevd.service.xml    | 4 ++--
 man/systemd.exec.xml             | 2 +-
 man/systemd.journal-fields.xml   | 2 +-
 man/systemd.socket.xml           | 6 +++---
 12 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/busctl.xml b/man/busctl.xml
index 0c5f05af87..854eb38b53 100644
--- a/man/busctl.xml
+++ b/man/busctl.xml
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
           <term><option>--activatable</option></term>
 
           <listitem><para>When showing the list of endpoints, show
-          only endpoints which haven't actually been activated yet,
+          only endpoints which have actually not been activated yet,
           but may be started automatically if accessed.</para>
           </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/journalctl.xml b/man/journalctl.xml
index b695b3d6a9..623d96695d 100644
--- a/man/journalctl.xml
+++ b/man/journalctl.xml
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@
                                                         terse output only
                                                         showing the actual
                                                         message of each journal
-                                                        entry with no meta data,
+                                                        entry with no metadata,
                                                         not even a timestamp.
                                                         </para>
                                                 </listitem>
diff --git a/man/journald.conf.xml b/man/journald.conf.xml
index e0796e1cce..27c326e909 100644
--- a/man/journald.conf.xml
+++ b/man/journald.conf.xml
@@ -269,12 +269,12 @@
                                 violated when systemd-journald is
                                 started, the value will be raised to
                                 percentage that is actually free. This
-                                means that if before there was enough
-                                free space and journal files were
+                                means that if there was enough
+                                free space before and journal files were
                                 created, and subsequently something
                                 else causes the file system to fill
                                 up, journald will stop using more
-                                space, but it'll will not removing
+                                space, but it will not be removing
                                 existing files to go reduce footprint
                                 either.</para>
 
diff --git a/man/machine-info.xml b/man/machine-info.xml
index ddf8f8b3d0..7448e68fd4 100644
--- a/man/machine-info.xml
+++ b/man/machine-info.xml
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para>The <filename>/etc/machine-info</filename> file
-                contains machine meta data.</para>
+                contains machine metadata.</para>
 
                 <para>The basic file format of
                 <filename>machine-info</filename> is a
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
                 execution engine.</para>
 
                 <para><filename>/etc/machine-info</filename> contains
-                meta data about the machine that is set by the user or
+                metadata about the machine that is set by the user or
                 administrator.</para>
 
                 <para>Depending on the operating system other
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Options</title>
 
-                <para>The following machine meta data parameters may
+                <para>The following machine metadata parameters may
                 be set using
                 <filename>/etc/machine-info</filename>:</para>
 
diff --git a/man/sd_journal_print.xml b/man/sd_journal_print.xml
index a716cc35e6..871baff8a5 100644
--- a/man/sd_journal_print.xml
+++ b/man/sd_journal_print.xml
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ sd_journal_send("MESSAGE=Hello World, this is PID %lu!", (unsigned long) getpid(
                 be guaranteed. Using
                 <function>sd_journal_print()</function> has the
                 benefit of logging source code line, filenames, and
-                functions as meta data along all entries, and
+                functions as metadata along all entries, and
                 guaranteeing chronological ordering with structured
                 log entries that are generated via
                 <function>sd_journal_send()</function>. Using
diff --git a/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml b/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml
index 286ff14639..4318a2fd44 100644
--- a/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>Extract the last coredump
                                 matching specified characteristics.
-                                Coredump will be written on standard output,
+                                The coredump will be written on standard output,
                                 unless an output file is specified with
                                 <option>-o/--output</option>.
                                 </para></listitem>
diff --git a/man/systemd-journald.service.xml b/man/systemd-journald.service.xml
index 0a20e21159..4d2cb40805 100644
--- a/man/systemd-journald.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-journald.service.xml
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>syslog</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 call, from standard input and standard error of system
                 services or via its native API. It will implicitly
-                collect numerous meta data fields for each log
+                collect numerous metadata fields for each log
                 messages in a secure and unfakeable way. See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.journal-fields</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                for more information about the collected meta data.
+                for more information about the collected metadata.
                 </para>
 
                 <para>Log data collected by the journal is primarily
diff --git a/man/systemd-system.conf.xml b/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
index 9a1a99fecf..6f36930a06 100644
--- a/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
                                 <listitem><para>Configures the initial
                                 CPU affinity for the init
                                 process. Takes a space-separated list
-                                of CPU indexes.</para></listitem>
+                                of CPU indices.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/systemd-udevd.service.xml b/man/systemd-udevd.service.xml
index 0e49fa07f6..bb04694342 100644
--- a/man/systemd-udevd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-udevd.service.xml
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
         <term><option>--exec-delay=</option></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>Delay the execution of <varname>RUN</varname>
-          instruction by the given number of seconds. This option
+          instructions by the given number of seconds. This option
           might be useful when debugging system crashes during
           coldplug caused by loading non-working kernel
           modules.</para>
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
         <term><varname>udev.exec-delay=</varname></term>
         <term><varname>rd.udev.exec-delay=</varname></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Delay the execution of RUN instruction by the given
+          <para>Delay the execution of RUN instructions by the given
           number of seconds. This option might be useful when
           debugging system crashes during coldplug caused by loading
           non-working kernel modules.</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml
index ae134f2d89..630a28cb54 100644
--- a/man/systemd.exec.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
                                 <listitem><para>Controls the CPU
                                 affinity of the executed
                                 processes. Takes a space-separated
-                                list of CPU indexes. This option may
+                                list of CPU indices. This option may
                                 be specified more than once in which
                                 case the specificed CPU affinity masks
                                 are merged. If the empty string is
diff --git a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
index bb89ed58d3..b492aae0ae 100644
--- a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@
                 JSON Format</ulink>, the addresses of journal entries
                 are serialized into fields prefixed with double
                 underscores. Note that these are not proper fields when
-                stored in the journal but for addressing meta data of
+                stored in the journal but for addressing metadata of
                 entries. They cannot be written as part of structured
                 log entries via calls such as
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_journal_send</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>. They
diff --git a/man/systemd.socket.xml b/man/systemd.socket.xml
index 3e1dd8859b..67267b2744 100644
--- a/man/systemd.socket.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.socket.xml
@@ -90,9 +90,9 @@
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 for more information about .service files). The name
                 of the .service unit is by default the same as the
-                name of the .socket unit, but can be altered with
+                name of the .socket unit, but can be altered with the
                 <option>Service=</option> option described below.
-                Depending on the setting of <option>Accept=</option>
+                Depending on the setting of the <option>Accept=</option>
                 option described below, this .service unit must either
                 be named like the .socket unit, but with the suffix
                 replaced, unless overridden with
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
                 <para>Socket units may be used to implement on-demand
                 starting of services, as well as parallelized starting
                 of services. See the blog stories linked at the end
-                for introduction.</para>
+                for an introduction.</para>
 
                 <para>Note that the daemon software configured for
                 socket activation with socket units needs to be able