From 69c3bedc376e0e49a03378fbd049dcade46dcc62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2013 02:47:45 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] man: grammar and wording improvements
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to:
- missing words, preposition choice.
- change of /lib to /usr/lib, because that is what most distros are
using as the system-wide location for systemd/udev files.
Conflicts:
man/journalctl.xml
man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml
man/sd_bus_request_name.xml
man/systemctl.xml
man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
man/systemd.device.xml
man/systemd.exec.xml
man/systemd.timer.xml
man/udev.xml
---
man/daemon.xml | 2 +-
man/sd_is_fifo.xml | 2 +-
man/systemd.service.xml | 2 +-
man/systemd.unit.xml | 2 +-
4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml
index 7790420..1fe4546 100644
--- a/man/daemon.xml
+++ b/man/daemon.xml
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@
description files.</para>
<para>In systemd, if the developer or
- administrator wants to make sure a service or
+ administrator wants to make sure that a service or
other unit is activated automatically on boot,
it is recommended to place a symlink to the
unit file in the <filename>.wants/</filename>
diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
index 4bb2236..58cd1c9 100644
--- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
+++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
called to check whether the specified file descriptor
refers to a special file. If the
<parameter>path</parameter> parameter is not
- <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether file
+ <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether the file
descriptor is bound to the specified file
name. Special files in this context are character
device nodes and files in <filename>/proc</filename>
diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
index e869f95..e3a370f 100644
--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@
<programlisting>ExecStart=/bin/sh -c 'dmesg | tac'
</programlisting>
- <para>Only select environment variables
+ <para>Only select environment variables that
are set for executed commands. See
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd.unit.xml b/man/systemd.unit.xml
index b70c5e9..f6b4b24 100644
--- a/man/systemd.unit.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.unit.xml
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@
of units. When systemd stops or restarts
the units listed here, the action is
propagated to this unit.
- Note that this is a one way dependency —
+ Note that this is a one-way dependency —
changes to this unit do not affect the
listed units.
</para></listitem>